Is my Spanish correct? It's my homework, but I am confused. Help?

We usually say "Dia de Gracias" and you should capitalize. Instead of Durante, say En. There are some more syntax errors, because it shouldn't be in past tense, but your teacher isn't going to be as picky as a Spanish speaker. Why would your mother be the cause of a cold (call it "resfriado" instead) and then "me senti" is better, because it is a reflexive verb. You should actually say "ir de paseo" instead of "ir a di un paseo" and make sure that ir is in past tense, I'm going to let you do that. It's irregular :c) The next sentence, you forgot to put "ir" in past tense again. Ropa is never plural, so change that and the adjective must match. Instead of "Por ultimo," use "Por fin" and take away "para" and have your adjective match. When I say that your adjectives must match, that means plural or singular and feminine or masculine. I didn't give you the answers because it's your paper, but it should help you! Go to wordreference.com if you need any single word help.